A Dream Within A Dream – a micro prose challenge

It crept through darkness. Shadows lingered over my bed. I waited, blankets pulled up, eyes searching the dark, breath ragged. I could feel it touching me, the only human in the room. My name, a moan escaping its lips. Sleep, would not find me until I answered its call.

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  1. Christine says:

    Great tense little moment here I definitely found myself wondering, but what happens next?!

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    1. The Writer says:

      Thank you!

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  2. I have had my fair share of those bad dreams.

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  3. Ana says:

    I have had my fair share of those disturbing dreams. ugh!

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  4. This was terrifying. Great job!

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    1. The Writer says:

      Thank you

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  5. Dreams like that are awful…I found myself trying to figure out what was a dream and what was the reality.

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    1. The Writer says:

      Happens to me all the time.

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  6. Very tense! Found myself wondering what would happen when she answered.

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  7. I could feel it touching me….. gave me goosebumps.

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    1. The Writer says:

      Thank you

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  8. rachml says:

    Definitely creepy! Nice job

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    1. The Writer says:

      Thank you!

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  9. Asha Rajan says:

    You really maintained that sense of suspense and eeriness. Nicely done!

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    1. The Writer says:

      Thank you

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